Rethinking Climax: A Teacher's Guide to Engaging Students
- kusiclassroomcorne
- Aug 9
- 4 min read
Updated: Sep 6
For the first few years of teaching fourth grade, I struggled to help my students grasp what the climax—or turning point—in a fiction story really was. I used to define climax as:
The most exciting or intense part of the story — when the main problem reaches its highest point, forcing the character to face their biggest challenge
Year after year, I noticed that many students struggled to identify the climax in books. This was especially true for simpler, quieter stories that lacked a lot of adventure, excitement, and thrill.
For a long time, I thought it was normal for students to struggle with this concept. I figured that climax was just a tricky idea to grasp.
But then I realized the problem wasn’t the students or that identifying the climax was too difficult—it was how I was teaching climax that was the problem.
I was teaching climax in a way that was muddy. It sounded right, but it wasn't giving students a clear or complete picture of what the turning point truly was, making it difficult for them to identify.
The Problem with “Most Exciting”
Not every climax is super exciting, intense, or suspenseful. Some are, of course, but not all. When we tell students to look for the most exciting part or the event that has them on the edge of their seat, they might:
Pick an action-packed chase scene that’s actually part of the rising action.
Confuse a small twist in the middle with the true turning point.
Completely miss the subtle but pivotal moment that changes everything.
My Shift: Framing Climax as a Glimmer of Hope
Instead of “most exciting,” I now teach:
I stress that, at this point in the story-that is, the climax, the character has not yet solved his or her problem, but there is a sense of hope that they will for the first time since the conflict was introduced.
Story Mountain Metaphor
I always use a story mountain metaphor when teaching climax. This approach really helps illustrate my point (which I will get into below) and is traditionally used to teach story structure.
Conflict
Conflict is introduced early on in the story. Once the conflict is introduced, the character starts an uphill climb, so to speak, in an attempt to solve his or her problem.
Without the conflict, there is no uphill climb. The conflict sets the story (or in this metaphor, the hiker) into action.
Rising Action
The rising action is the longest part of the story, filled with actions and attempts to solve the character's main problem.
With each event in the rising action, the reader does not feel a sense of hope. At this point, the end (story resolution) is not in sight—because you cannot see through the mountain.
Climax
The story (or hiker) has reached the top of the mountain. From here, the character has a new vantage point he or she did not have while climbing up the mountain (the rising action).
The new vantage point -the character can finally SEE the end (story resolution). The character is not there yet, but there is now finally "light at the end of the tunnel." It's hope, for the first time, that the character WILL soon solve his or her problem.
I have found that, over the past three years of teaching, framing the climax as a glimmer of hope really clicked with students. They start thinking of climax as the moment in stories when they say, "Oh! I think (character) might actually make it / solve the problem!" This has led to some amazing conversations during book clubs and whole-class read-alouds.
Why the Traditional Story Mountain Can Be Misleading
For years, I used the standard “story mountain” diagram to teach plot structure — the one with a long upward slope for the rising action and an equally long downward slope for the falling action. It looked neat and balanced, and my students seemed to understand it… at least, I thought they did.
Here’s the problem: when both slopes are drawn to be the same length, it sends the wrong message. Students often incorrectly assume the rising action and falling action are equally long, with the same number of events. This can make it harder for them to pinpoint the climax, because they expect the “peak” of the story to land right in the middle instead of closer to the end — which is where it usually happens.
In reality, most stories spend much more time building up to the climax than they do wrapping things up afterward. The falling action is typically short and moves quickly toward the resolution.
That’s why I’ve shifted to using a more accurate diagram (see below) that shows the falling action as a much shorter slope. It’s a simple change, but it helps my students better understand story pacing and identify the climax with more confidence.
FREEBIE for You!
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The Importance of Climax in Storytelling
Understanding the climax is crucial for students. It helps them connect with the characters and the story's emotional journey. When they recognize the turning point, they can better appreciate the resolution that follows.
Encouraging students to identify the climax fosters critical thinking. Students learn to analyze how the climax affects the story's outcome. This skill is not just important for reading comprehension; it also enhances their writing abilities.
Final Thoughts
While there are probably lots of stories out there that don't have a climax that provides a sense of hope for the reader, I have found that more stories I share and read with my class DO than don't.
If you notice your students struggling to identify the climax, consider shifting the way you teach it. I'd really love to hear how it went in your classroom. Share your experience in the comment section below!
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